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JAMES RODERICK BURNS: THE SALESMAN'S SHOES
Modern English Tanka Press
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ISBN 978 0 6151 4396 5
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JAMES RODERICK BURNS: THE SALESMAN'S SHOES

Seventy-odd observationally-acute tanka, written with a seemingly casual, easy tightness. The best pieces exhibit a bare simplicity of tone and style that achieves an incisiveness of moment and juxtaposition:

	New boots and a peach—
	odd that the moment I feel
	grit beneath my sole
	is the moment I notice
	my teeth strike against the stone.
Here is another striking example:
	Moods, fluctuations—
	sometimes the stack of mailbags
	by the post room door
	seems like boiled sweets, other times
	dogs in a Chinese market.
The following piece is about as polished, succinct, sculptured and excellent as you can get:
	Lighting up a fag
	and idly scratching his arse
	in the vast scrap yard's
	wilderness of metal bones
	stands unreconstructed man.
This is a poet in control of the techniques through which we view what he sees.

reviewer: Alan Hardy.