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Time Haiku #22

Doreen King, in her editorial, introduces the forthcoming Time Haiku Award. The award is intended to promote competent haiku poets and to feature new and interesting work — TIME HAIKU already achieves this without the need of any such award. This twenty second issue is full of competent poetry and, on many of the pages, there are poems of an altogether higher order. Andrew Detheridge is an old hand who produces fresh, life enhancing images:

	in each other's arms
	but falling
	into separate dreams
This is such a poignant image; summing up in a few words that quintessential human condition.

Mr Detheridge's haibun CHICHENITZA, MEXICO is both elegant and informative:

The final awe-inspiring fact is that, at the equinox's, the steps are lit by the rising sun to take the form of the body of the snake; and leading all the way to the summit; we are silenced by the skill of this lost race.
Perhaps the poet could have dispensed with the first line of the following haiku:
	past and present:
	woman in Mayan costume
	sells us cans of coke
The juxtaposition of those two images says it all.

Many of the poems are quotable — this one by DAVID WESTON:

	squashed between the leaves
	of my grandmother's diary
	a Victorian fly
Ms King has included some interesting haiku instruction and haiku history in this issue: BACK TO BASICS and TORIAWASE: ONE OF BASHO'S LITERARY CONCEPTS (that of combining images in a single haiku).

TIME HAIKU is very well produced — well bound and pleasingly printed on good paper. I'll leave the reader with Ms King's delightful page one haiku (combining both physical and incorporeal movement):

	a strong gust
	takes the cat
	forward a life

reviewer: Michael Bangerter.
Time Haiku #23

TIME HAIKU is published twice a year, and was developed for, and continues to champion the accessibility of the haiku and associated forms. This issue has an most interesting contribution from Davies Lane Primary School, London (from where editor Erica Facey has just been awarded a certificate of dedication and professionalism for her work with young people. The freshness of the Davies School work is widespread from the Katrusha May Buniak's introspective:

	immortal beauty
	something as wonderful as love
	is not always true
to Shamarke Hilouk's joyously naïve
	a rabbit jumps
	over the tall grass
	into a nice blue sky
and Belhan Bartlett's
	a rhino's anger
	startled by approaching watchers,
	people disappear
There is A TIME SAIJIKI by Erica Facey, SPRING, in which she writes about pheasants (kiji) She quotes from Buson
	Late spring day
	a pheasant lands
	on the bridge
and Shuson Kato
	Glistening eyes
	of the pheasant
	being sold
I hope I may be forgiven for pointing out a delightful misspelling, making a socio-statement which I feel should be attributed to our current royal consort:
Peasants were first introduced into Britain by the Romans and again, later, by the Normans ... I have often seen them in Essex.
By their nature collections of haiku (and indeed any other short forms) are a garden of delights filled with small, perfectly formed ideas that drift across their pages with the transience of falling leaves.
	barely a movement
	hardly a sound
	a patient wolf awaits its prey

	Andrew Lowe

		sunset over sapphire
		blue seas; making no splash, the
		falling crimson sun

		Kenneth Crane

	water in the trees—
	clouds in my pockets
	spring rain

	Paul Williams

		Earthy-leaved fragrance
		Mum's yellow chrysanthemum
		a silent Sunday.

		Marianne Barber
are but a token dipping into this collection which should be on the shelf of all would-be poetry aficionados.

reviewer: John Cartmel-Crossley.
Time Haiku #25

Editor Doreen King is nothing if not enthusiastic when it comes to the haiku form and its various offshoots including the haibun and the tanka. In her all too brief editorial she writes:

The poets concerned give a depth of imagination and skill that ... cannot be ignored
But I'm forced to ask: Is that enough? Shouldn't poets be pushing barriers, developing themes, finding new ways of working with the form? The purpose of the Time Haiku Journal is to give credit to good work, and to show those who are new to the genre the standard that can be achieved.

The reader is duly informed and indeed Jack Barry's winning effort from issue 24 reproduced here on the winners' page is a good example of what I would have also selected as a good and meaningful haiku:

	longest night
	the neighbour's lights
	lost in the trees
It's full of connotations and can be analysed to death. Suffice to say that it conjures up atmospheric images that I like and for that alone I can't fault it.

On the other hand is the following poem from Michael Henry a meaningless riddle or is it just me? Is it about football, rugby, babies, dogs, and England's place in the world or what?

	Sycamore leaves
	dribble down an empty street.
	England not in the lead.
Fortunately a very large percentage of what's on offer is in the Jack Barry class and so there's plenty of good reading and lots to think about. A couple of my favourites are these, the first from Jack Barry again, who may well make it a prize-winning double, and the second from Ron Woollard:
	cold bed at dawn
	the downy woodpecker's
	hollow rattle 

		on the rock face
		the climber's rope
		just a spider's thread
Contributors are invited to submit a generous selection to this neat and tidy journal now in its 13th year. It will be interesting to see if anyone can knock Jack Barry from his perch.

reviewer: Gwilym Williams.