![]() Thorny Locust PO Box 32631, Kansas City, MO 64171-5631, USA ISSN 1094-0154 $5 Subscription $15 pa checks payable to Silvia Kofler latest issue appears to be Vol.15 Fall/Winter ![]() Web design by This page last updated: 11th April 2008. |
Thorny Locust Vol.13 fall/winter 2005 | |
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Thorny Locust is a 36 page stapled magazine edited by Silvia Kofler in Kansas City, USA. According to the back cover blurb, it features poetry, fiction and artwork. This particular issue claims to explore the myths we carry to our destinies.Close reading of the magazine failed to disclose any particular theme to this issue or to penetrate Ms. Kofler's rather enigmatic claim. I was also at a loss to understand how the occasional doodles and clumsy squiggles that decorate some of the pages are misleadingly described as art work. Turning to the writing, I found little I would want to recommend — preferring the poetry to some rather indifferent prose. Worst is a piece called SPECIAL EFFECTS by Rosanna Armendariz. This coarse piece involves a gynecologist (sic), a missing uterus, menstruation and tomato ketchup. It is intended to be amusing, but would probably get the thumbs down from Bernard Manning. Of the poetry I enjoyed Patrick Dobson's description of a Seer who, IN THE ALLEY ... fiddles in his pockets; Mouse whiskers and rattlesnake traps, Badger teeth and bison hornsand Lorraine Loiselle's COMING STORM where A pale waxen yellow opaque sky. The earth's ears are up. We measure the silence until a boiling wind arrives and trees try to run away.However, much of the other poetry in Thorny Locust is slack, clichéd and predictable like Graham Duncan's ARRIVALS: Something's always turning up; a bad pennyThere are other poems which would work better as prose like Ronald J. Pelias's ON THE STREETS OF NEW ORLEANS On Royal Street, shop after shop sells Mardi Gras masks, Cajun hot sauce, and Aunt Sally's original Creole pralines, antique jewels, voodoo dolls, and antebellum figurines.At $5 per issue, Thorny Locust is vastly overpriced. Compared to the wide range of beautifully produced, erudite, entertaining and reasonably priced British little magazines, it is surprising that Ms. Kofler is able to find a market in Europe. | ||
| reviewer: Patrick B Osada. | ||
| Thorny Locust Vol.14 spring/summer 2006 | ||
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There is such an abundance of journals around at the moment that it makes one stop and think of the sheer number of would-be-writers trying to get published. Thorny Locust is one of the magazines these writers should send their pieces to. For starters, it contains both poetry and prose (of the flash fiction sort, i.e. very short), it reveals a broad spectrum of styles, and lastly, it is a well-presented, visually attractive journal in which to be published. One of the joys of reviewing for NHI is the exposure to such little-known gems as Thorny Locust. With each journal comes exposure to new poets and the marvellous way they use our language. Take BUCKSHOT by Mather Schneider: I dream the most marvelous sorrow in the world.These lines end a poem that resists beurocracy and mourns our loss of individuality. The poet's impression is that to dream of independence is to dream the impossible. It is like dreaming of a world that coexists peacefully while living on the Gaza Strip. THE ORANGE BUTTERFLY by Marina Rubin is another poem in this vein. The butterfly is a tangible object, an enamel brooch, and invokes the feelings of the poet towards dreams of grandeur and of a more fulfilling life thanks to a material object. Dana Stamps, in GREAT JOB, attacks this defeatist moan: You have to create a way of looking at things that is so different that it tears the world a new asshole.There is a strong political undercurrent pulsing through Thorny Locust. Having not read the journal before I can't tell if this is the journal or just the poets they have picked for this issue. What I do know is that the political poems are nicely tempered by miscellaneous poems with just as much power. Valerie Loveland's PIGEON is an example: you are the best kind of gorgeous, overlooked, kaleidoscope swirls on your feathers that are so easy to miss while you're picking through the dumpster in the alley.Then there are the poems that make you think, like David Wagner's THE MASTER-ARCHER WAS ONE OF THE FEW ARTISTS: In front of about five-thousand spectators, on Sunday at a Paris circus performance, a skilled archer missed the apple atop his wife's head and the arrow impaled his wife's head. The master-archer was one of the few artists who'd mastered this art.Read carelessly, one could miss the importance of the last line, and the double loaded meaning of the line 'his wife's head'. There is an almost angry emphasis on the line; a grim repetition that focuses the reader as much as the archer himself was focussed during his act. While I have hitherto concentrated on the poetry in Thorny Locust , it would be remiss of me not to mention the prose. Phillip Wexler's CACTUS POACHER I found to be the best offered. The others appeared little more than creative writing class exercises. The twists at the end were routine, whereas in CACTUS POACHER, the horror was unexpected even though the story made you feel uneasy throughout. Thorny Locust is an interesting read. It is a thought-provoking journal that despite being light in the prose section, is one to watch out for if you like a kaleidoscope of poetic styles. | ||
| reviewer: Fionna Doney Simmonds. | ||
| Thorny Locust Vol.14 fall/winter 2006 | ||
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A largish, squareish, entirely new to me stateside zine in which, says editor Silvia Kofler writers open doors to time's tombs.Indeed, there is a wistful, melancholic air hanging over much of this issue. TRUTH AND BEAUTY, REDEFINED FOR KEATS by Robert Michael O'Hearn sets the scene by asking what else was there to do with idle time? Other than, Beauty simply has no money. Truth no time to explain.Brian Daldorph picks this up and runs with it in his poem about a prisoner, COUNT DOWN: he's just one more used-up guy sitting a cell with a fortune in time and nothing to spend it on.There's a stab of surreal humour in HEY, BIG FELLA by Kenton Wing Robinson when the narrator of the poem is asked: Do you write the obituaries? Are you the young man I should telephone the day I die?Two stunning poems dominate the second half of the magazine. KEEPING SCORE by Beverly Boyd conflates (as apparently does the Sports Section of the poem's sub-title) the world of war and sport as the sport-like language of the one collides with the warlike language of the other as the poet notes: these post-warriors, winners and losers for their team, gaze for a moment from their head shots, some smiling, never to know they are profiled, buried deep in the sports section, as the United States of America keeps score.In SQUIRREL HUNTER, Rod Farmer becomes a most reluctant pest-exterminator: As a young man, I had given up hunting — I had never enjoyed killing for sport, and fourteen months as a soldier in Vietnam had ended my interest in guns; yet I was now a squirrel hunter.It's as powerful a plea against violence as is KEEPING SCORE. Often, stateside zines are slick and glossy, but Thorny Locust has a homespun look to it, accentuated by Catherine McCrae's cover and Philip Miller's internal artwork — however, the content is that of a slick and glossy magazine. | ||
| reviewer: John Francis Haines. | ||
| Thorny Locust Vol.15 spring/summer 2007 | ||
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Thorny Locust. What a fantastic name for a journal of poetry. This one is the usual black and white, stapled affair, but the paper is of a decent quality and the text is clear throughout. There is even a mixture of quirky illustrations, though one wonders whether they ought to have been printed at a higher DPI, given that every one is pixilated. There's a decent bit of poetry in the 36 pages of Thorny Locust, and generally it is readable, though easily characterized; the poems are relatively plain narratives, mostly freeverse, and usually ending with some form of posited truth. Occasionally they appear rather like homilies, as in the case of Gary Beck's STRIFE: In the eternal struggle between the nobles and the people, the ranks of the forgotten are filled by new recruits who meet their untimely end, victims of those who eat cake, yet begrudge a crust of bread to those who toil for them.When the poems move away from this unadorned style, or from the colloquial style of many others, to something richer and more poetically satisfying, cracks begin to show: The green frog hops and plops In and out of my imagination on the Periphery of my consciousness, Like Basho's frog in the pond Or the frog in the moon in China.Phyllis Becker's FROG is in the vein of so much nature poetry, relying on its evocation of an animal and its world in order to succeed. But even here, in the first few lines, the unimaginative (though maybe daring) "hops and plops" is a false note, not to mention the ensuing departure into Basho, which is usually a bad sign. At least the poem avoids Li Po's recycled accident with the moon. That said, there will no doubt be something here to please almost anyone and, at the affordable price of $5 per issue, this indulgence will hardly break the bank. | ||
| reviewer: James Midgley. |