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Pennine Platform
Nicholas Bielby
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Pennine Platform #58

Pennine Platform is a beautifully produced A5 journal oozing sophistication from between the deceptively simple covers. From the charcoal picture on the front cover to the two line notes on contributors at the back, the entire aim is to do as the title suggests: give poetry the platform. Edited by Nicholas Bielby, contributors include the well known, such as Fred Johnstone and the experimental, like Matt Dalby.

The selection of poetry within is wide and varied. The Editorial is a provoking discussion of education and its place in creating and maintaining national identity in the UK.

The first poems of the journal grabbed my attention, in particular the way in which Oliver Andrew combined archaeology and aging in EXCAVATING A MIDDEN. The implications of an ancient race that were:

	slurping oysters from dawn to dusk
conjured amusing images of a bacchanalian aftermath, in my mind! But the sharpness of the speaker avoiding the mirror of Andrew's other striking poem, MIRROR, is very vivid, lending a new twist to war poetry.

Fred Johnstone's poem A YOUNG AFRICAN REFUGEE IN IRELAND — UNPUBLISHED LETTER is particularly pertinent to this Irish reader, with those in Ireland that are coming to terms with the aftermath of immigration of both economic and political refugees. There are many here who believe that an example should be set by those who govern Ireland, but it appears that they won't engage with the subject in a meaningful way that will yield in the future. This idea is captured well in this poem, with the futility of the speaker's final outcome:

	When they came for me,
	They asked me in the police-car,
	My profession. I play drums, I said, truthfully.
Andrew Boobier creates an excitement out of words and mingles it very simply in a short poem ON OPENING THE FLY-LEAF OF YOUR BOOK. It is very provocative, from the title to the last line, celebrating that 'first intensity.' I loved it!

Aging is the theme of Gill Nicholson's poem IMPRINT, which uses the image of two sets of footprints in the sand, reminiscent of the idea of the unseen help, to oppose a younger and older speaker in the poem, dealing with the aging parent and the swapping of roles. The beach imagery is well conjured, including the,

	treading soft sand,
	relishing the cruelty of pebbles
conjuring the walk along the sea edge, that is best enjoyed when barefoot.

EVE REALISES HER PURPOSE THEN BECOMES CATHOLIC by Kathleen Kenny has some really sharp images moving the poem forward from creation myth, through the loss of innocence into the harshness of mundane life without Eden. It is, to be sure, a subject that poets return to again and again, that loss of Eden and whose fault the loss is, but here the simplicity of the lines,

 
	the big red hen of guilt,
	the small red cock of pleasure.
belies the contracted imagery locked into the words, and brings to mind a poem of Leonard Cohen's; NOT GOING BACK (Stranger Music, Jonathan Cape, 1993). However, Kenny's poem is wrought using the idea of guilt that appears to live hand to mouth with Catholicism of a certain age.

Altogether there are many poems gathered in Pennine Platform begging for prominence here, I have selected but a few. It is well worth subscribing to and has an appealing mix of UK voices and those from beyond, gathered by an editor with an agreeably discerning eye.

reviewer: Barbara Smith.
Pennine Platform #59

Editor Nicholas Bielby's atmospheric charcoal and pencil drawing of the Jamiyat Tabligh-Us-Islam Central Mosque caught under a lugubrious Bradford sky, perhaps a sunset, features on the cover of this publication produced with the assistance of the Leeds Philosophical and Literary Society and the University of Bradford. The note to the illustration flags up the point; Britain's foremost textile town, situated in Yorkshire, is changing its cloth:

while new mosques are being built, churches are being closed
Today the textile town boasts more than 40 mosques. This prompts the query as to what writers of poetry picture in the mind's eye when they think of Yorkshire and its brooding Pennine Hills these days? A peaty bog that's the backbone of England with scatterings of sheep and straggly towns huddled in dark valleys? Whippet dogs and thin men in caps? The poetic darklings of poets like Ted Hughes? The editor muses over the idea of Englishness in the second part of his two part editorial. He informs readers:
Exploring the ramifications of moral irony is very much what our literature is all about.
This 60 page booklet contains 53 new poems including several poetic tributes to Clare Chapman, a well-loved member of Pennine Poets, who died last autumn. Mabel Ferret writes:
I have always been proud of the fact that the first small book of poems we published at Fighting Cock Press was Clare's DUNEGRASS.
One poem included from the publication DUNEGRASS is THE ORRERY. An orrery is a mechanical apparatus for exhibiting the relative positions of the members of the solar system and is so-called after the 4th Earl of Orrery for whom an early copy of the machine was made. Here is the 2nd of THE ORRERY's trio of verses:
	All heaven's days come measured out.
	Construct-a-kit
	Lets the Inventor set the sun
	Raise clod-head planets one by one,
	Odd things aligned: the bone, scope, tin,
	The brass fulfillment on the shelf,
	Scrap-mental treasure of himself,
	Outlasts the clay whom clay sucks in.
There are many first-rate poems to pick from in Pennine Platform #59. Ruth Midgley has a pair of poems in this issue, one of which is BOTTALACK MINES: WEST PENWITH. Lines such as the following can only serve to whet the appetite:
	Sheds are tethered
	by iron ropes to earth 
	and with sealed cottages
	crave shelter from trees cocked 
	like slanted hats. Gorse beckons
	over wind-eaten cliffs
Nigel Humphreys, always a delight to read, contributes three poems to this issue. A MARRIAGE UNSEAMED begins:
	Gnaw-bone years slight the creek
	with their false runnels, a staggering flow
	bickering through the sluice, the earth
	shafted for auriferous clay while
	a generation is tilled and cropped.

	And all that time I at your side
	barrowing mullock, sifting 
	black silt through my cradle
	listening to the windlass prattle
Attracted as I am to the gritty poetry of Midgley and Humphreys (and long may it continue) there's also a little of what used to be known politely as avant-garde to appreciate tucked between the covers. Andrew Boobier's THE STRAY is one case in point:
	The park is a blue whale
	harpooned by winter.

	No-one comes. The gates
	are locked, swollen with ice.

	Dogs hold court
	around the litter bins:

	they sniff each other's arseholes
	and piss on the swings ...
Unlike Boobier's dogs there is found in the rear section a useful alphabetical index with thumbnail biographies on each of the 36 featured poets. An out of the ordinary feature is to be found in the Book Reviews Section. Nicholas Bielby comments on all the reviews submitted but may not always agree with the views of the reviewer.

All in all it's a characteristic Yorkshire thing and what the Pennine region Yorkshire is famous for; value for money, grit, honesty, good quality cloth.

Why not try one for size.

reviewer: Gwilym Williams.
Pennine Platform #60

This is the first copy of Pennine Platform I've read and I must say I'm impressed. Although naturally some of the poems are less notable than others, on the whole this is a publication packed with well written, insightful poetry that engages the reader.

The issue starts with Jenny Dixon's JAIRUS' DAUGHTER, a meditative and thought provoking narrative from the point of view of Jairus' daughter who was brought back to life by Christ, encouraging the reader to ponder the consequences of that miracle. James' Deahl's HERE is also a poem rooted in a strong spirituality where:

	I stand watching migrating geese
	worship the air with their wings.
In James McKie's ARUN VALLEY FLOODS there are no geese, but:
	Father has a great pair of webbed feet:
	all farmers need them to hoe in a river
an example of the slight surrealism used by several writers here to throw images into relief and make the reader stop and think about the otherwise commonplace. Jenny Morris also uses surrealism in SEEING OLGA:
	An image of this butterfly
	as a loose collection
	of books flickering
	through her brain,
	pages falling out
	of her ears
Andrew Boobier's images are vivid and unsettling in HOW LONG ARE WE CONDEMNED TO VIEW THE BEAUTIFUL VISTAS?:
		The airport runways
	are the colour of dried blood and beneath our feet
	the imprint of creatures crushed millions of years ago.
Meanwhile, Thomas Orszag-Land relies more on narrative and rhyme than on imagery to deliver his arresting message in PEACE CONFERENCE, where the reader is addressed as being unable to:
		recognise behind the table
	yourself — the one who could unload the gun.
There are lighter poems too. C.B. Follett's THE COW, THE MOON, A GLASS OF MILK is a delightful evocation of childhood questioning and grandmother's love and Mary Sheepshank's THE SAPPHO OF SWANSEA is pure entertainment:
	Your lust for the lyrical never grows dimmer
	(for you've been reciting from cradle to zimmer)
	and what entertainment could really be finer
	than you reading rhymes from your garden recliner.
For variety and depth, Pennine Platform is an excellent read for anyone who values poetry.

reviewer: Juliet Wilson.
Pennine Platform #61

This issue of the magazine which has lived in the poetry world for over 30 years gives out 57 new poems. As would be expected, most poems are honed to reality issues and excitements of the imagination are few and far between. K.V.SKENE goes some of the way in THE OPPOSITE OF TRUTH:

	Hope is green in the early morning,
	patterned with the shadow-lace
	of trees 
but the park site also brings us to basics:
	flying geese — useless
	as a politician's promise, dull
	as an unspent cent.
It is also typical that the leader poem is TO ELIZABETH JENNINGS. The late poet Elizabeth Jennings contributed in her early days to NEW LINES anthology, part of a stabilizing effort by 'Movement' — poets in countering imaginative excesses to copiers of the style of Dylan Thomas. JOSIE WALSH weaves some nostalgia in her memory with this poem of deep feeling and satisfying account:
	You never married, yet speak volumes of love.
	Lexicons of tenderness, prayerful praise, lavished
	delicately like lapis lazuli or gold leaf
We are reminded
	It does no good to romanticize what was/
	always intended to be prosaic
in MORE ON THE HOMES OF ARLINGTON by M.A.SCHAFFNER. This trend in the issue of reducing or reversing dream or wishfulness to 'common-sense' values is shown again in E-COMMERCE IS THE WAY OF THE DIGITAL WORLD, MY FRIEND! by JOHN T. TRIGONIS:
	Yet slaves we've become to a 99 per cent shoeshine —
	the down-sized American Dream —
The downgrading from luxurious dream also takes the icing off London cake in LONDON THE LOUSE by ZEKRIA IBRAHIMI:
	Sad, I determine 
	London poses in ermine
	Full of gorged vermin
Pennine Platform in content seems to miss the lyricism, the allure of imagination, the turn of word which produces the memorable poem or lines of poetry, but it has prospered so long that obviously it has a reader-backing which looks forward to its contents, even though sometimes there is a 'flatness' resulting from bursting romantic or unstable bubbles.

reviewer: Eric Ratcliffe.